blood thirst

made some progress on my supersecret script. got through a scene that's been giving me trouble. the script's way too long right now but i've got to try to not think about that as i hammer out this first draft. christ, i'm slow.

it's a horror film and i've finally gotten to the blood-and-guts part. more violence! yay! part of the challenge is finding new ways to say "blood splatters". some variations:

BLOOD POURS...

BLOOD GUSHES...

BLOOD SPEWS...

BLOOD SHOOTS...

BLOOD SPRAYS...

BLOOD SPATTERS...

BLOOD ERUPTS...

AN EXPLOSION OF BLOOD...

A SEA OF BLOOD...

A RAIN OF BLOOD...

A CATARACT OF BLOOD...

A HURRICANE OF BLOOD...

A MAELSTROM OF BLOOD...

A CARNIVAL OF BLOOD...

A BLOOD FANTASIA...

A BLOOD EXTRAVAGANZA...

A BLOOD WONDERLAND...

A PUNISHING AMOUNT OF BLOOD...

TRUST ME -- JUST A WHOLE HELL OF A LOT OF BLOOD...


counting the hours to the end of this blasted week...